What can be said of a man like Payton Sherwood? Is he a man without a city? Is he a man in search of a life he once had that is now out of reach and a neighborhood he once knew but is now foreign to him?
First let me begin by being positive. I believe Mr. Atwood is a talented writer. He writes with a certain flair for analogies that I envy. "The music was beating too loud to be polite, brute force was necessary to make any headway. I felt like a blood clot in the midst of angina." Mr. Atwood also captures the real essence of the people of Payton's neighborhood from the initially unknown Gloria through all the characters Payton meets along the way. Unfortunately most of those meetings wind up being detrimental to Payton's health. Mr. Atwood also does this with a great sense of humor. "The milkman swore. Then swore down at me, using his boot for punctuation. Talk about your lactose intolerants." As well as, "My eyes opened to a rose hue, but at least I could see out of both again. If I believed what I saw: a fuzzy blue house slipper tap-tapping the sidewalk in front of my face. Sprouting from it, a hairy, walnut-brown ankle growing up into a knobby knee. To see more of him, I had to turn over."
It is clear Mr. Atwood is very knowledgeable of the East Village and the people. The problem I had with the book was with the plot. I'm not sure I understand what was so important about a Rolex that you would risk your life several times over for it. More importantly, the first time Payton risked his life it wasn't even for his Rolex. It was for some total stranger involved in a situation that he happened upon. So I asked myself, was it really about the Rolex initially? It couldn't have been, otherwise Payton would have let it be once he got his watch back. And if it was not about the Rolex, then what was it about? Is Payton trying to fill some void in his life left by Clair? Does he feel he screwed up his relationship with her and now must do something to atone for that? Is he getting the mother/father/big brother fix by helping figure out who set Gloria up? Or is it about his neighborhood and wanting in some way to preserve it? Does he feel that by rescuing Gloria he is fulfilling some duty to protect and defend his neighborhood and its occupants, some of whom don't even know him? Do I care by the time it is all over with? Frankly, no. It took me a long time to read this book because I just could not care about what happened to these people and I sure as heck couldn't fathom why Payton should care.
The characters made much more of an impression on him then he ever made on them. And even at that, they wind up being mere images on a screen passing through his life. The incident with the Chungs and why they left the neighborhood and why that is important to the story is never explained! Gloria is left sleeping in his apartment while he goes clubbing and resolves the whole mystery. So what happens to Gloria? Does she thank him for absolving her of any wrongdoing and go back to living with the few friends she has among the living? Does she turn her life completely around because of what Payton has done for her? And what about the way this book ends? It ended so abruptly and left so much unexplained. The ending was as much a disappointment to me as the rest of the story. I really believe there should have been an epilogue.
I don't know if an epilogue would have solved all the problems I think this plot had, but it certainly would have helped. I read somewhere that this book was generating a lot of buzz before I had an opportunity to review it. I don't know what kind of buzz it is generating, but it must be among people who like the unusual and iconoclastic type of mystery novel with designer drugs as one of the threads winding through the plot (good luck finding the end of that string). It is cleary a novel for the 90's, but not for me!
Thank you so much for the opportunity to review a book and I would welcome this chance any time it came up again!
--Barbara Betts
More to come!